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LiteraryMaryWriting and Random Creativity Workshops Poetry and LyricsLet Them Creep Slowly
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« on: July 24, 2010, 11:59:09 PM »

hold them on a
thread
my mom said

and let them creep
slowly
like lost, love-sick
pups.

chivalry isn't dead;
it's buried under
loud, explosive
decadence

and
failed sex.

we've been born of cynics,
he says.
and you're not one,
juliet.
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« Reply #1 on: July 26, 2010, 04:53:55 PM »

>loud, explosive
>decadence

>and
>failed sex.

I like this a lot.
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« Reply #2 on: July 30, 2010, 07:30:43 PM »

thanks Smiley

i like it, too.
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« Reply #3 on: August 24, 2010, 05:56:07 AM »

Mysterious and cryptic and interesting and good....
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"How vain it is to sit down to write when you have not stood up to live"- H.D. Thoreau
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« Reply #4 on: August 24, 2010, 02:36:58 PM »

C'est ci bon Smiley
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Would it have been worth while,
To have bitten off the matter with a smile,
To have squeezed the universe into a ball
To roll it toward some overwhelming question
To say: "I am Lazarus, come from the dead,
Come back to tell you all, I shall tell you all"

T.S. Eliot
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