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« on: May 28, 2010, 03:58:03 AM »


Hi.    I'm Trisha.    I mostly write poetry, but occasionally write fiction also.   I post most of my work on my blog, sweetlozey. blogspot. com
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« Reply #1 on: May 28, 2010, 09:11:35 AM »


How'd ya' find Mary?

And howdy.

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« Reply #2 on: May 28, 2010, 10:24:31 AM »

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« Reply #3 on: May 28, 2010, 11:56:40 AM »


Hello Trisha!

I read about you through Lynn...nice to see that you've come over at mary's forums!

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p.s. Trisha will be featured in the June newsletter.
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« Reply #4 on: May 28, 2010, 03:39:51 PM »


Hello and welcome to Literary Mary.

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« Reply #5 on: May 29, 2010, 06:54:30 PM »


Hi there.

Welcome to LiteraryMary.

Enjoy.

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« Reply #6 on: May 30, 2010, 02:07:46 AM »


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I read a poem on your weblog.  It is not a mirror of all your work, but it is perhaps a mirror of how you typically write.  I noticed abstractions and I noticed no capitals.  'Modern' writing.  Whatever happened to. . .

I'll leave that unanswered as I could catalog a very populous country of poetic artifacts which should have never died.  Stick around here, post more for others than for yourself, and you can learn from discourse.  A weblog is fine for hosting, not for learning. 



it is true that i rarely capitalize or use punctuation.
next week i'm going to start deleting all the vowels from my poems.
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How'd ya' find Mary?

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« Reply #8 on: May 30, 2010, 03:32:14 AM »


it is true that i rarely capitalize or use punctuation.
next week i'm going to start deleting all the vowels from my poems.



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« Reply #9 on: May 30, 2010, 05:54:21 AM »

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« Reply #10 on: May 30, 2010, 07:05:28 AM »


Why to the first, and it's probably true to the second. Never know what the fuck someone will do for the sake of stepping on the corpse.



After I'm done deleting the vowels, I'm going to delete the letters with stems and tails, so that everything looks completely uniform.  Tongue

I'm not opposed to the use of capital letters and punctuation in poetry.  I just personally prefer not to use them.  I feel like the words are allowed to flow more freely on the page when they aren't bogged down with punctuation.  And capital letters look very jarring to me.  I've read many decent poems that were ruined by bad use of punctuation.

It seems like you are very protective of traditional poetics (if there is such a thing).  I'm curious as to why?

I read and thoroughly appreciate work from a variety of poetic movements.  My list of favorite writers encompasses a wide range from poets like Petrarch and Thomas, who used strict rhyme schemes and rhythms in their work, to poets like Hannah Weiner, who wouldn't know a rhyme if it was slapped in her face (let alone a straight line of words). Poetry is a constantly evolving art form.  There is no one way to construct a poem that is better than others.

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« Reply #11 on: May 30, 2010, 11:06:37 AM »

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« Reply #12 on: May 30, 2010, 11:36:18 AM »


poetry is still evolving - you just need to know where to look.  The Wall Street Journal just did a write up on Flarf (and the battle between Flarf and Conceptualism -they's gonna rumble yes indeed).  I know most people have strong opinions one way or the other about the movement, but I think it's great. 

As far as poetic movements are concerned, I favor the Language poets and the New York School poets. This week, my favorite poet is Kaia Sand.  Changes regularly though.  Last week it was Yeats.  Right now, I also think Joshua Butts is the shit, but only because he masterfully wrote the line "I've brought the most insulting side dish" into a poem.
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« Reply #13 on: May 30, 2010, 12:01:58 PM »

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« Reply #14 on: May 31, 2010, 03:39:18 AM »


flarf is a worthy part of poetry's evolution.

the rumble will have to wait.  i've got final exams this week.
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